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‘Best of Eagle’ awards honor staffers

One of my favorite newsroom gatherings every year is the day we announce “Best of Eagle” winners for our staff from the previous year’s work. In choosing winners, we look back over our best work of the previous year, and it’s always a reminder for me of how many talented journalists the newsroom is fortunate to have.

Throughout the year, we have in-house monthly contests to choose the best headline, photo, writing and page design. (For 2010, we’re adding a monthly contest for the best innovative work on Kansas.com.) At the end of each year, we ask outside judges to pick the best from the monthly winners. These are the Best of Eagle winners, and each receives a plaque and cash award. Their names are also engraved on plaques that remain in the newsroom to honor all previous winners.

On Thursday, we announced this year’s winners:

Headline: Rod Pocowatchit for his headline “Claws and Effects,” with a subheadline “Fight scenes, loud explosions drive X-Men Origins: Wolverine.” The headlines ran on the May 1 Go! section for the opening of the Hugh Jackman film.

Page Design: Rod Pocowatchit for his Go! section cover design for the movie “Angels & Demons.” You don’t need any more evidence of the range of Rod’s talents: best headline, best page design, and he writes weekly about movies in the Sunday Arts & Leisure section. This is the third time Rod has won the Best of Eagle design award, and his first award for headline-writing.

Writing: Roy Wenzl for his series, “The Miracle of Father Kapaun.” The eight-part series, published in December, recounted the Kansas priest’s life and death in a Korean War POW camp, through the voices of fellow prisoners who say Kapaun worked endlessly to lift their spirits and give them hope that they would survive. This award marks the seventh time Roy’s work has been honored as a Best of Eagle winner.

Photography: Fernando Salazar for his powerful image of Jacie Brown holding newborn Aiden, her son who would live 51 minutes, but touch his parents’ lives forever. This was the third time Fernando’s photographs have been named Best of Eagle.

We also honored Travis Heying’s multimedia work on video, audio, photographs and a 50-minute documentary on Father Emil Kapaun. Travis is a six-time winner of our photography award.

Congratulations to all of the Best of Eagle winners, as well as the monthly contest winners, for their hard work in bringing you a newspaper and Web site we’re proud of.


Tip on Tiller shooting came from an Eagle editor

One of the most common questions news staff members are asked about a major news story is, “How did you hear about it?”

On most crime stories, the answer is the police scanner, or a police report.

We learned through unusual means last Sunday that George Tiller had been shot, and I think it’s right to disclose to our readers how that happened.

For more than 10 years, Assistant Metro Editor Marcia Werts and her family have attended Reformation Lutheran Church. She was arriving at church Sunday shortly after the shooting occurred, and her husband and daughter were inside the church. She phoned Deputy Editor Tom Shine to alert him to the developing story. Marcia was understandably shaken by what happened at the church that day, and we did not ask her to take part in news coverage, though she did stay in touch with other Eagle editors through the day. Other media organizations also were arriving at the church about the time Marcia arrived, presumably after hearing of a shooting on the police scanner.

It’s rare that one of our staff members is so closely connected to a developing news story. Many people have asked how The Eagle confirmed the news of George Tiller’s death so quickly that morning, and I want to be open with our readers on the circumstances of how this happened.

Is it wrong to put a preposition at the end of a sentence?

A couple of readers recently took issue with The Eagle ending sentences and headlines with prepositions.

While I have great affection for those who love grammar, I have to disagree with them on this rule, or, more precisely, myth.

To paraphrase Winston Churchill, this is the kind of “rule” up with which we should not put.

Like another grammatical misconception, never split an infinitive, we can blame this one on Latin — preposition comes from the Latin pre (in front of) + ponere (to put). One of the wonderful things about English is that it’s more flexible than Latin. This linguistic freedom allows us to move beyond restrictions dictated by 18th century grammarians and sound natural, not stuffy.

For example: Where are you from? sounds right; From where are you? sounds like the writer has a concussion, or is Yoda. She knows what she’s talking about. Good. She knows about what she is talking. Blurg.

This isn’t to say prepositions should always go at the end. That would be an equally troublesome proposition. Many times a preposition doesn’t present the stress that is necessary at the end of a sentence and times when formality is the goal.

In general, the best course is to sidestep awkward constructions and let euphony be the guide.

Election season means barrage of bias claims

I love election season. For all of its flaws, it’s still democracy in action. And a presidential election carries with it the added excitement of history in the making.

It’s also the season for a daily stream of emails I get accusing the newspaper of bias for or against the writer’s favored candidate. Many are emotional and accusatory, built on the absolute certain knowledge that the news staff is laboring to execute an intricate conspiracy.

I take each one seriously. Sometimes, I quickly see how a writer came to his or her conclusion. A word we used may be a little loaded in meaning, or we left out a pertinent fact. Most of the time, these are errors of oversight or failure to anticipate how an article or headline would be perceived by readers. Sometimes, the writer or editor truly has bought too hard into one candidate’s argument, and we have to talk about how to provide better balance. And sometimes, the plain fact is that with so many offices up for election, some races are in danger of slipping through the cracks and not getting enough coverage unless we’re vigilant.

The hardest complaints to resolve, though, are the ones that are based on an unspecific perception the reader has about the intent of the writer. One article last week drew seething responses – and threats to cancel the paper – from two readers. One believed the article was grossly biased toward a liberal viewpoint. The other was equally passionate that The Eagle is “a conservative rage” and this story was another example of our right-wing bias.

The concept of bias is complex – both in its reality (no one can truly have zero beliefs and biases) and in the reader’s passionate perception that bias exists. Often, we see what we want to see or expect to see. It can be hard, when we’re pushed for specifics, to put our finger on the source of the slant we think we see.

One of my naive hopes each election season is for civility in our debate. I love debating ideas and viewpoints with friends and listening to them explain their beliefs. And I continue to be saddened and frustrated by the growing refusal of so many people to debate ideas without attacking people. I’ve had very enlightening discussions with people I respect greatly – I sometimes disagree completely with their view on a subject, but I don’t feel a compulsion to attack them personally, nor do I lose respect because our ideas might conflict.

We have a complicated assignment until November. We have to take seriously our responsibility for squelching biases, or the perception of them. At the same time, many readers today have a hair-trigger for proclaiming bias, and we’re not helped when whole political organizations establish a strategy of urging people to claim bias as a way to get letters to the editor published. (The MoveOn organization sent an email blast linking to instructions on how to do this for an orchestrated attack on Sarah Palin. A reader sent me the email, complete with a Web form for sending letters to the editor and a suggestion that the best way to get letters published is to pick an article and allege your viewpoint was excluded.)

For good and for bad, happy election season to all.

How did late Biden news get into The Eagle?

A couple of readers wrote that they were pleasantly surprised to see that the late-breaking news Friday night of Barack Obama’s VP pick made it into The Eagle’s Saturday print edition. One reader noted that the story wasn’t in some of the country’s largest newspapers, including The New York Times.

How did we do that? Lots of hustle from our nightside editing staff and pressroom Friday night. And it helps to be in the central time zone, with later deadlines than the East Coast papers.

Michael Roehrman, our deputy editor for production, told me in an “overnight note” that about 10 people scrambled in the newsroom when a news bulletin moved on our wire services with word that Obama had picked Joe Biden. Our Saturday paper had already gone to press, so Michael’s staff asked the pressroom team to run the press slower until we could get new pages to them. That means some early copies of the paper likely went out without the news, but I haven’t been able to verify that yet with a production manager.

It’s amazing to watch an experienced night news team in action getting breaking news in the paper. It’s a very complicated undertaking, with designers remaking pages, copy editors writing new headlines, editors pulling together stories from often-sparse available information. That gets rushed into production, new plates are made, the press is stopped, replated, and then starts rolling again with the fresh news.

I’m proud of how well our team executed this maneuver Friday night, and to reader David B., thank you for the great note to start Monday morning. I’m glad we were there for you Saturday morning.

An unnecessary apostrophe?

A reader wrote me today wondering about an apostrophe in a Local and State section headline: Your opinion’s wanted.

I can see why the reader thought it was wrong. It could be read as Your opinions wanted with extraneous punctuation.

But it wasn’t a mistake. Here, the headline writer used opinion’s as a contraction of opinion is.

As always, though, I do like hearing your opinion.

Michael’s 2 cents on the election headlines

Here’s a how-the-cocktail-wiener-is-made peek at the creation of the Karl Peterjohn/Tom Winters headline Sherry wrote about in her last post.

Copy editors write the headlines and then a person called the slot either signs off on them or re-writes them. Last night the copy editor working on that story wrote “Peterjohn topples Winters in county race” for the headline. “Topples” is a good verb and one we don’t use often. The problem was that it was very short, leaving an empty space that screamed “Wow, I may be interesting but I look anorexic. Can’t you fill me out?”

So the slot — that was me last night — looked for a different word.

The way I saw it, Peterjohn, who has been unsuccessful in previous runs for office, unseated an incumbent by a 14-percentage-point margin. Was the margin wider in other races? Sure. But looking at the big picture made me quite comfortable saying he overwhelmed him.

Reader is underwhelmed by election headlines

John is one of my frequent emailers who takes issue with our coverage or with actions of one of the community’s governing bodies on occasion. He’s a careful news peruser and is usually correct in the points he makes. Here’s what he wrote today:

“Peterjohn garners 55% of the votes to Winters’ 41%, and the Eagle headlines this at the top of Page 1A as overwhelming. Marcey Gregory gets 60% of the vote in the #3 district commission race. That seems to be slightly more overwhelming by at least 2 percentage points. Kelly Arnold gets 58% of the vote in the race for county Clerk, and the Eagle says he won easily, and placed that opinion on Page 6A. Jim Ryun – behind by the still unsettled bid for the 2nd district congressional race was simply in trouble. In fact, by the time that edition of the paper was written, Ryun was behind. Why not just state the vote numbers and percentages and let your readers decide is a man who lost by 107 votes is merely in trouble, or factually out of the game?

Jim Slattery got 69% of the vote in the senate race. Ty Masterson got 60% in his race. Oletha Faust-Goudeau received 71% of the votes in District 29, and Carolyn McGinn got a whopping 83 in District 31, and Steve Abrams got 60% of Distric 32′s votes. Why aren’t these over-whelming numbers?”

John, I get to disagree this time! We didn’t characterize the vote margin as overwhelming. Our headline said that Peterjohn overwhelmed his opponent, using the word as a verb, not an adjective describing the vote totals.

OK, that’s splitting hairs. But a 14-percentage point win is not winning overwhelmingly? Doesn’t seem like an opinion to me, but I guess it could be if you were expecting a 30-point win and thought you squeaked one out. I’ll invite Michael Roehrman, our deputy editor/production, to share his two-cents’ worth also.

Stories on suicide, aviation strike draw complaint

I had a voice mail message today from a reader upset with us for running a front-page story Sunday on Sedgwick County’s rising suicide rate while also publishing a story about an impending machinists strike at Hawker Beechcraft.

She suggests that suicides increase during an aviation strike and that it was insensitive of us to publish the suicide story during a strike.

A couple of thoughts come to mind. One is that, if there truly is a correlation between increased suicide and aviation strikes (I’m not aware that we’ve researched for such a connection), then Tim Potter’s story, which included resources for suicide prevention, would seem particularly well-timed, not poorly timed.

Additionally, though, it’s probably safe to say that the safeguards in our editing process would not typically flag such a potentially tenuous connection of two unrelated news stories. Our copy desk, which is the last line of defense against errors or inadvertently embarrassing juxtaposition, does a terrific job of looking for potential connections before words and images on a computer screen become a printed newspaper.

As a former copy editor, I’m not surprised that someone didn’t suggest a connection between the two stories. I wouldn’t have, either. (And to the caller’s question, no, I’m not new to Wichita.) Tim’s story is a weekend “enterprise” story which, for the Sunday paper, is typically written and edited ahead of the usual daily news production cycle. Longer Sunday stories are generally ready for publication by Friday if not earlier, and often the reporter and editor are not in the office on Saturday when the newspaper is being produced – in design, and on the copy desk, where headlines are written.

The Hawker strike story was “live news,” a story covered on Saturday by reporter Molly McMillin. By the time the strike vote was final and Molly’s story was written, Tim’s story already had been written and put into the production process. I explain this simply to illustrate how two news stories can end up on the same page, but take widely varying timelines to get there.

None of this is to say that I don’t believe a strike is a hardship on the striking workers, as well as a company’s non-striking employees. Sometimes, though, a reader may have a personal connection to a story and see a relationship with other news that most readers, and most editors, don’t see on first inspection.

Readers give voters guide a thumbs up

I came back Monday from two business trips to find a string of thank-you emails from readers who love the new interactive voters guide at Kansas.com. I’m delighted that so many Eagle readers and Kansas.com users like the new online voters guide, which is a significant improvement over what we have been able to offer in the past.

Marcia Werts, an assistant metro editor, and Nick Jungman, deputy editor/interactive, did most of the work to bring you searchable profiles on 713 candidate running in 410 races in Sedgwick, Butler, Harvey and Sumner counties. Along with biographical information, profiles include candidate responses on key election issues. We were able to create this site with a lot of hard work by Marcia, Nick and other newsroom staffers, plus a grant from the John S. and James L. Knight Foundation to our Web partner, E-ThePeople.org, to build the site with us.

Feedback on the site has been terrific, and to answer a couple of readers’ questions: yes, we plan to do it again for the November elections. Several readers appreciated that the “build your ballot” feature found candidates for them when they weren’t sure which district they lived in for a particular office. Another woman wrote, “Because of this site I was able to persuade my husband to peruse his parties races and to do an advance vote in the primary since we will be in Colorado on the day of the election.”

The way we see it, that’s the ultimate success for us with this election toolkit: Giving citizens the information they need to help them take part in the democratic process. To all who dropped me a note, thanks for the feedback.