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March’s winning headlines

Davidson headline

The voting for the March headline contest is done. Here are the winners.

Assistant sports editor Tom Seals pulled out his slingshot and took first place.

Davidson slays Goliath

That headline ran with the story about Davidson’s win over Georgetown in the NCAA Tournament.

Second place went to senior editor Michael Roehrman.

Trails and tribulations

That one was with a story about Kansas landowners suing for compensation after the government took old railroad rights of way on their properties.

Third place was by food writer Joe Stumpe.

Raising the bar

This one accompanied a story about a Wichitan whose bar-cookie recipe is a finalist in the national Betty Crocker “Bake Life Sweeter” contest.

See an Eagle headline you like or think is noteworthy? Drop me a line.

February’s winning headlines

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The voting for the February headline contest is done. It was an odd month for scoring. Out of all the headlines, six received votes and there was a tie for first place, second place and third. Here are the top four.

The first headline winning first place was written by online sports guru Josh Wood.

Nobody’s perfect

That headline perfectly summed up the Patriots’ surprising Super Bowl loss to the New York Giants.

The other headline taking first place was written by senior editor Michael Roehrman:

It’s crunch time

That one was with a story about the annual kickoff to Girl Scout Cookie deliveries in the area.

The first headline winning second place was written by deputy desk chief Lisa McLendon.

This time, it wasn’t Avon calling

That accompanied a story about a woman who residents of a local neighborhood said was soliciting herself door to door.

The other headline winning second place was written by copy editor Jennifer Comes.

States mine for growing lode of silver: Retirees

This one went with a story about the efforts of economic development groups to encourage seniors to resettle in their communities.

See an Eagle headline you like or think is noteworthy? Drop me a line.

The Dr. is out

Dr. Zaius

A conversation going on in copy editing circles centers on the appropriateness of using “Dr.” before names.

John McIntyre of the Baltimore Sun posits: “But since people do earn doctorates, and like to use doctor with their names, and circulate among people who also like the sound of titles, the reasonable course is to follow the practice that The Times recommends: Use the title when the person has an earned degree and the holding of that degree is relevant to the context of the article.”

Bill Walsh of the Washington Post differs, saying “If you can’t fix a broken leg, I’m not calling you ‘doctor.’ ”

I agree with these two on many points, but not this one. While context can often make clear what sort of doctor a person is, that’s not always the case. For example, take this sentence:

Dr. Reed Richards of the Kirby School of Medicine said the Modok virus could infect thousands of people and llamas.

The question becomes: Is Richards a medical doctor or a Ph.D.? An obvious assumption, since it refers to a medical school, is that Richards is physician. But what if the title is because he holds a doctorate in virology or biology? There’s no way a reader would know.

That’s where our style comes in.

The Eagle’s solution is to skip the title and be specific. Therefore, it’s family physician James Hesse, colorectal surgeon Noel Sanchez or Russian-language professor Lisa McLendon. This style imparts more information than the honorific Dr. does.

There, now that you know, don’t you feel better?

January’s winning photos

Gregg Marshall

Each month I post to The Editor’s Desk the winners of our monthly headline contest. There are, however, a few newsroom contests that aren’t getting the blog love they deserve. So, let’s remedy that.

The photograph you see at left (click on it to see a larger version) is Fernando Salazar’s shot of WSU basketball coach Gregg Marshall’s reaction to the season-ending injury of one of his players. It took first place in January’s best-photo contest.

Second place went to Bo Rader for his picture of a KU touchdown in the Orange Bowl. Third place was a tie between Jaime Oppenheimer’s touching image of three girls at the end of a dance, and Mike Hutmacher’s silhouette of construction work on the downtown arena.

Don’t forget that if you want to purchase one of these or any other picture from The Eagle, all you have to do is click on the “Buy Photos & Pages” link on the left side of most Kansas.com pages. If you don’t feel like clicking back to the main site from the comfy confines of our blogs, here’s a direct link.

A tonic for your financial headache

Kevin G. Hall and Tony Pugh

Does thinking about the economy and personal finance make you feel like you rode a Tilt-A-Whirl after drinking a few too many mojitos? McClatchy correspondents Kevin G. Hall and Tony Pugh know how to make things stop spinning.

From the true rate of inflation for the average Jane/Joe in the country to sorting out the rebate stimulus plan, Hall and Pugh dole out answers to readers’ financial and economic questions. They’re not financial advisers but, as their Web site says, they “are available to answer your questions about the shaky economy at home and abroad, and what’s in store for ordinary Americans in the face of gathering economic storm clouds.”

To root around or ask a question of your own, visit their forum here.

Adjective problems

A rather irate reader called to share her opinion of us after the heading “Democrat results” appeared above a list of Hillary Clinton and Barack Obama’s percentages in Tuesday’s primaries.

While Democrat and Democratic both function as adjectives, in some quarters the former is considered an insult.

In the case at hand, dropping “ic” was an oversight, not an uberslight. It wasn’t a dig at Democrats and I’m sorry if anyone was offended by the mistake.

January’s winning headlines

January’s winning headlines

The voting for the first monthly headline contest of 2008 is done. Here are the winners.

First place was written by copy editor Julie Mah.

Texas has carbon
footprint the size of . . .

That headline appeared with a story about the Lone Star state producing more greenhouse gases than California and Pennsylvania — the second- and third-ranking states — combined.

Second place went to senior editor Michael Roehrman:

Chalk and awe

That one was above a story about a fourth-grade class at Gammon Elementary being excited to meet their pen pal, a soldier who recently returned from his second tour in Iraq.

Third place also went to Roehrman.

Heaping whelping

This was with a story about the Kansas Humane Society having so many puppies that they were offering them for half price.

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Why we published the photos

Putting together the paper each day is a series of questions. Some of them, such as which stories we place on the front page and which will go inside the Local&State section, have obvious answers. When the questions revolve around matters of taste or values, things aren’t quite as simple. The past two nights, the appropriateness of two photographs fell into that realm.

The first photo ran on Page 1B on Wednesday. It accompanied a story about a mural created by Nick Salazar, a senior at Metro-Boulevard Alternative High School. To answer a question in his social studies class – If Jesus Christ, Mohammed and Buddha were to reappear on Earth tomorrow, would they be capitalist, socialist or communist? – Salazar created an illustration on an old chalkboard in his classroom. The mural, which included drawings of Jesus, Mohammed and Buddha, was a prominent part of the photo we ran.

Here was the issue: Many Muslims find artistic depictions of Mohammed blasphemous. With that in mind, do we run the photo, not run it or, since the drawing of Mohammed was on the far right side of the photo, crop that portion off?

After talking to several people I decided we should run it as is. There were a couple of reasons for that decision. First, the photo was germane. The story was beautifully written and didn’t go the easy “look at the cool thing this student did” route. The story was deeper than that and the photo enhanced it by showing readers exactly what was created. Second, I’m sure there are many things we report on that some people don’t think we should cover or don’t like to see or read about. My opinion, however, is that decisions based on fear or second-guessing usually will result in a wrong choice.

The second photo that led to discussions ran on Page 8A on Thursday with the tornadoes story. It showed a man and his daughter looking at ruins of his other daughter’s home in Shirley, Ark. The second daughter was among those killed when a tornado went through the town. Her body was found lying next to that of her 14-year-old Labrador retriever. In the foreground of the photo was the body of the dog.

The photo made me pause. Was this something readers really needed to see? To be honest, I have tremendous affection for dogs and the photo disturbed me deeply. That reaction, though, is appropriate. Dozens of people died in the storms and we should be bothered by the death and destruction. Ultimately, I decided that running the photo, including the dog’s body, created a stronger emotional impact than just a shot of the family looking at the ruins.

So, would you have made the same decision or gone another way? Click on the comments link on the left and tell me what you would have done.

Why wasn’t Iraq-statements story in the paper?

A couple of readers wrote in wondering why we didn’t run a story about a study that compiled statements made by President Bush and others about Iraq in the two years after the Sept. 11, 2001, terrorist attacks.

It was mentioned in the WeBlog section of the Op/Ed page, but it wasn’t in our Nation and World report.

I should point out that those looking for some hidden conservative agenda here should go play somewhere else. Heck, those looking for some hidden liberal agenda are wasting their time, too.

OK, back to the topic at hand. Basically, comparisons of statements made leading up to and during the war versus what was found are topics that have been reported on many times in the paper over the past few years. So, with little new ground being covered, I didn’t see any compelling reason to run it in the print edition.

On Kansas.com, however, we published the full story as well as posted links to the organizations that created the study.

That story can be found here.

If you’re looking for another opinion on the study, Newsbusters and others have taken issue with it.

Agree? Disagree? Jump over to the comments section and sound off.

Results at a glance

One aspect of my job as copy desk chief is overseeing the national and international stories in The Eagle.

A couple of readers called Wednesday wondering why we didn’t have a box with our Michigan primary story listing how each of the candidates did.

Good question.

Simple answer: we dropped the ball.

One of our goals in our election coverage and elsewhere is to make the essential information quick and easy to find, alongside more-detailed stories.

We’ll do better next time.