Michael’s 2 cents on the election headlines

Here’s a how-the-cocktail-wiener-is-made peek at the creation of the Karl Peterjohn/Tom Winters headline Sherry wrote about in her last post.

Copy editors write the headlines and then a person called the slot either signs off on them or re-writes them. Last night the copy editor working on that story wrote “Peterjohn topples Winters in county race” for the headline. “Topples” is a good verb and one we don’t use often. The problem was that it was very short, leaving an empty space that screamed “Wow, I may be interesting but I look anorexic. Can’t you fill me out?”

So the slot — that was me last night — looked for a different word.

The way I saw it, Peterjohn, who has been unsuccessful in previous runs for office, unseated an incumbent by a 14-percentage-point margin. Was the margin wider in other races? Sure. But looking at the big picture made me quite comfortable saying he overwhelmed him.

One Comment

  1. LonnythePlumber
    Posted August 7, 2008 at 6:05 am | Permalink

    Every headline was helpful and correct. The biggest story of the election was Peterjohn’s win. It was also a surprise that Arnold won over Skelton who has a better known name in the community and that he did so with a margin.
    The stories aren’t so much the percentages but what those percentages mean.