Monthly Archives: November 2007

A disappointing label

I got home Thursday night and logged onto freep.com, the Web site of the Detroit Free Press, my hometown paper. Under their list of most popular stories was one with a headline something like, "Body of missing porn star found.” I thought for a second, "Surely, that’s not the Emily Sander story.” But, unfortunately it was.

I guess I should have known it was coming. Tim Potter, our reporter who has covered the story this week, started getting calls from shows like "Inside Edition" and national cable news shows on Thursday. That was a day after the Associated Press reported that Sander appeared on an adult Web site. It was obvious why they were calling, and it had nothing to do with their concern for Sander or her family. A missing persons story had suddenly gotten a lot sexier.

Reporting that Sander was involved with the adult site was fair because police were trying to determine whether that had anything to do with her disappearance. The Eagle included the information in our Thursday edition and at Kansas.com. But by Thursday morning, police had discounted any link between the site and Sander’s disappearance. Unfortunately, that didn’t stop a lot of national media missing from labeling Sander as a "missing porn star.”

It’s pretty easy to label people, and we in the media — including The Eagle — sometimes fall into that trap. Emily Sander was many things — student, daughter, granddaughter, friend. If the national media was going to pick a label, I think it would have been more appropriate to pick one of those.

Tom Shine

How did we do that?

We200711221eOne of the many concerns newspapers editors have these days is whether younger readers are paying attention to the paper. That doesn’t seem to be a problem in Wichita.

I recently received an e-mail from a fifth-grader at Minneha Core Knowledge Magnet School:

"I am writing to you regarding the Wichitalk of November 22nd. The cover showed a man and a woman reading the Wichitalk, which, in turn, shows a man and woman reading the Wichitalk, which, in turn, shows a man and woman reading the Wichitalk, and so on. I figured that it was a never-ending chain of a man and a woman reading the Wichitalk and wondered, ‘How did you do that?’ Will you please write back to me and tell me how you performed that amazing feat?"

I asked Coryanne Graham, art director for Wichitalk who also designed the page, to respond. Here is what she wrote:

"The Thanksgiving day cover of Wichitalk was a fun cover to work on. We first took a picture of our two ‘pilgrims’ reading an older GO! section of the paper. We put the Wichitalk logo and the headline on that image. Then we used a computer program to make a copy of that version of our cover. The copy was then shrunk and tilted and warped to make it fit over the old GO! section. We repeated that until the old GO! section was no longer visible in the overall image. Thank you for asking such a good question. I hope you enjoy reading Wichitalk and The Wichita Eagle."

Not only is it reassuring to hear from young readers, but to know that some of them are articulate, curious students of The Eagle speaks well to our future.

Arlice

When styles collide

Wombat
No wombats were harmed in the writing of this post.

A tractor-trailer hauling wombats from Tulsa, Okla., to Colorado Springs, Colo., crashed at Woodlawn Boulevard and Mount Vernon Road this morning. The wombats’ whereabouts is unknown.

If that appeared in The Eagle, you would think we had lost our minds.

In earlier posts, I wrote about using the Associated Press Stylebook and why The Eagle has its own stylebook.

Sometimes, the two don’t agree. Most of the differences are idiomatic, but a few are based on local sensibilities. In all cases, though, our style takes precedence.

Here’s a couple of examples from the idiomatic side.

The AP says use semitrailer or tractor-trailer. We think simply saying semi works just fine. AP also says that Colorado Springs, Tulsa, Little Rock, Fort Worth and many others familiar to Eagle readers need a state name to follow the city name. Yeah, OK.

On the local sensibilities side, AP says “The preferred term is black. Use African-American only in quotations or the names of organizations or if individuals describe themselves so.” Our entry says, in part: “Black Wichita residents refer to themselves as both black and African-American, and The Eagle strives to reflect community practice by accommodating both terms. While black remains the preferred term in Associated Press style, African-American is more appropriate if the subject of the story prefers it or if the story ties black subjects to their African heritage.”

Another example is AP says mentally retarded is “The preferred term for those with significantly subaverage intellectual functioning.” Our style is to use mentally disabled or developmentally disabled.

There are many other differences, but you get the idea. The Eagle is a local paper and we endeavor to reflect our community.

Oh, and the paragraph at the top? In our style it would read:

A semi hauling wombats from Tulsa to Colorado Springs crashed at Woodlawn and Mount Vernon this morning. The wombats’ whereabouts are unknown.

— Michael

Black Friday - a definition

Blackfriday
Saturday’s 1A story on the shopping frenzy called the day Black Friday three times. This weekend, a reader asked me why we called it that (a sure sign that we should have explained it in the story.)

Here’s the scoop from Snopes.com, a great site where you easily can lose time digging through all the cool information:

“ ‘Black Friday’ (as it is known in the retail industry, supposedly because it’s the day when retailers turn the corner and see their income statements move out of the red and into the black, or it’s the day when retail workers are exposed to the worst crowds and customer behavior).”

— Michael

Winning headlines

Octoberheadforweb
It’s time once again to announce the winners of the monthly headline contest. Here are the top picks for October.

In first place is this eye-catcher from features editor Lori Linenberger.

‘Ten Commandments’
breaks all the rules

This appeared over a WichiTalk review (one-and-a-half stars — ouch) of the new animated movie.

Second place went to online producer/sports guru Josh Wood for:

Armed to the teeth

This accompanied a story about the Wichita Thunder’s dentally challenged defender, Tyler Liebel.

Third place went to copy desk chief Michael Roehrman for a headline above a photo of devastation and story about disaster training in Wichita:

This is only a test

Well done, everyone.

See an Eagle headline you like or think is noteworthy? Drop me a line.

— Michael

Thanksgiving paper — woo hoo!

We just put Thursday’s paper to bed and it’s a good one. You’re going to find 100 tips to help you alleviate holiday stress and still fit everything in, a Thanksgiving cornucopia in WichiTalk and a story on The Mangino Way in Sports.

It also has advertising circulars. Lots of advertising circulars. More advertising circulars than you can shake an elf at.

If you’re one of our Kansas.com-only readers, trust me, you’re going to want to run out and buy a copy and luxuriate in all that glossy advertising goodness.

And hey, if you’re out shopping early Friday morning and you see a half-conscious fat guy with a crew cut who’s wearing an Eagle jacket, it’s probably me. Come over and say howdy.

Have a great Thanksgiving, everyone.

— Michael

Getting names wrong is painful

Someone asked me recently what problems at work drive me crazy. Or, craziest. That’s a tough one to answer, but I think misspelled names bug me the worst.

Desk chief Michael Roehrman wrote earlier about steps we’ve taken to decrease misspelled names. I’m heartened that the result so far has been good.

An email from a reader last week drove home why I hate getting names wrong. Her son had been honored for an achievement at school, and his name was in a list of names in our Thursday community pages. The news release we received had his name wrong. But that doesn’t matter. What matters is that his mom should be able to clip his name from the paper and put it in a scrapbook he’ll always have.

Whether we got the name wrong or it was given to us that way, the result is the same.

We can correct the error on our Page 2A corrections list, but it can never be "fixed." The original story was too long to rerun entirely, and his news clipping will always be misspelled. One of the great advantages of a printed newspaper over other media is that tangible story you can cut out and save. It’s disappointing when that clipping is wrong, and a correction can never erase that disappointment.

– Sherry

Since you asked….

Too much has stacked up in my email inbox the past couple of weeks, and I’m working on catching up on responses. Here’s a start on some questions thrown my way:

Q. “I heard the Eagle is related in some way to one of the TV stations. True?” A. Sort of. We don’t share ownership or any other financial connection to a local TV station. But we have a formal news partnership with KWCH, working together on some news stories and weather coverage (including the daily weather forecast in the newspaper). Our radio partner for weather news is KFDI.

Q. “Why don’t you carry Peanuts?” A. We discontinued the comic strip in September 2006. The strips are reruns of previously published Peanuts comics, and we chose to retire the comic in favor of newer offerings.

Q. “I’m surprised you run Brent Castillo’s column. It seems controversial for the Eagle. Do you agree with his viewpoints?” A. I can’t say that I share some of his views, but that’s the function of diverse Opinion pages — to represent a wide range of ideas and philosophies.

Q. “I’ve always believed your editorial page was too conservative and off-putting because of that. Then at dinner last night, a guy at our table was arguing that it’s liberal. What exactly is the tilt?” A. You’ll need to corner Opinion page editor Phillip Brownlee for an answer. At The Eagle, our editorial pages are a separate department that does not report to me as editor of the news operation. I can’t speak to Phillip’s political philosophy for the page. But I do get regular complaints that the editorials are too liberal and too conservative. Generally, I think folks are too quick to throw those labels on people or organizations, without questioning what exactly that label means — and without leaving room for gray area in the middle.

Q. “It’s annoying that I can’t walk in the front door of the paper. Why do people have to go to the back of the building?” A. The front doors are closed to visitor traffic for security reasons. We have a customer service counter inside the back entrance (where the parking is), and our building design doesn’t allow for it to be moved to the front of the building. Like most businesses, we needed to have a system for having visitors sign in so we know who’s in the building.

Q. “With KU’s football team still winning, I guess we should expect more misplaced sports stories on the front page.” A. Yep. KU is a national story, and locally, their season is something people are talking about. Their national ranking puts a spotlight on Kansas, too. That makes it front page story sometimes.”

– Sherry

Does X mark a spot of irritation?

Last weekend I opened my paper at home and was surprised to see Xmas in a headline. The surprise was because it goes against our style and because I was of the belief that many people find it offensive.

A bit of background: The word has a legitimate history, traced in print to the mid-1500s. The X, from the Greek chi, is for the first letter in Christ’s name. “Garner’s Modern American Usage” has a good quote on it from John Ciardi’s “A Browser’s Dictionary.” “Though commonly frowned upon by grammarians as slovenly and by the pious as profane, X has ancient antecedents as the symbol of Christ and the cross, so much so that illiterate Jews at Ellis Island refused to sign with an X, insisting on making an O, called in Yiddish kikl, little circle.”

So, while I was surprised when I opened my paper, here’s what I now find even more surprising: It’s been a week and I’ve not heard from a single reader who said it concerned them.

Has the view of some that Xmas is disrespectful waned, or are people being polite in not pointing it out?

Share your thoughts in the comments section below.

— Michael

We’re not trying to be subversive

Ford
A reader called this morning about the headline on Carrie Rengers’ column in Business Today.

Ford has
a jones for
Cessna
airplanes

She thought the headline was inappropriate for the paper, explaining that she thought “has a jones for” had a sexual connotation. That was in no way our intention in writing it.

Merriam-Webster’s first definition, traced to 1965, is that jones is slang for “habit, addiction.” The more recent definition, from 1974, is “to have a strong desire or craving for something.”

It’s the more modern use of the word on which the headline is based.

Several recent examples from other newspapers bear out this usage:

“Performed with minimal dialogue, the two-act story is simple. A city kid — of rather ambiguous gender in a puffy parka and bowl haircut — young Jamie is jonesing for a snowstorm.” The Star-Ledger (Newark, N.J.), Nov. 8, 2007

“Tabloid-reading rubberneckers jonesing for a musical train wreck to coincide with Britney’s career woes have only one song to latch onto: the lame Kevin Federline diss track ‘Toy Soldier.’ " The Washington Post, Oct. 28, 2007

“It is true that football fans are football fans in April, May and June, but the question is are they jonesing enough to support the AAFL?” Houston Chronicle, Oct. 27, 2007

A nudge-nudge-wink-wink headline may have a place, say, in a gossipy tabloid. Those aren’t the headlines we want to run in The Eagle.

— Michael