Monthly Archives: April 2007

Chasing the wind

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I’m going to admit to a mistake. We had terrific, terrific video on the site this week of the tornadoes forming over Reno County on Tuesday — and we let it fly under the radar (so to speak) on the site.

So I’m going to take this opportunity to trumpet the video. If you’re at all interested in severe weather — and what kind of Kansan are you if you’re not? — you’ll enjoy it. Click here, and it will pop up in a new window.

That video was shot by Kansas.com photographer Travis Heying, who was out with Kansas.com reporter Amanda O’Toole looking for the big storms that the Eagle and local meteorologists had promised for Tuesday. I asked Travis to write a bit about what was going on that evening:

Spring time in Kansas usually means violent weather, and several forecasters were saying that Tuesday was shaping up to be a real doozy. Reporter Amanda O’Toole and I decided to position ourselves to intercept any thunderstorms that might threaten the Wichita area. With a dryline coming in from western Kansas, we parked ourselves in Kingman.

This was Amanda’s first storm chase.

Two hours of sitting in a gas station parking lot watching rader imagery on a laptop told us that maybe things weren’t going to play out like some forecasters thought. We were getting ready call it a day before deciding to have a closer look at a thunderstorm building in southwestern Reno County.

We saw a lot of funnels and few small tornadoes. We also saw a lot of gawkers out trying to get a closer look. When you’re out looking for storm photos, thrill-seekers driving down dirt roads while staring up at the sky pose a much greater threat than the weather.

I chased storms for seven years before I saw my first tornado. Amanda saw one on her first try. I think I’ll bring her along next time.

This is just one more of our new experiments in video journalism. On Sunday, I urge you to look out for Travis’ work using video in our multimedia preview of Wild West World.

— Nick Jungman

Headline writer of the year

There’s an organization for just about everything in journalism, and for some time now copy editors at The Eagle have been active in a group called the American Copy Editors Society. Its members are the "behind-the-scenes" journalists who act as the quality control department for newsrooms across the country. They make sure news stories and pages meet newspapers’ standards and still arrive on your doorstep on time in the morning.

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Copy editors are also, in a way, our news pages’ marketing department. They write the headlines that "sell" the stories. We figure that a good headline has a lot to with whether you notice a good story. So you can see why headline writing is one of the copy-editing skills we most value here. And you can understand how excited we were last week to learn that our copy desk chief, Michael Roehrman (at left), was named ACES’s Headline Writer of the Year for midsize newspapers.

For the second time.

For this year’s contest, Michael submitted a portfolio of five headlines. Among them:

Will Pluto stay
a planet? It
looks remote

PRUNING ITS BRANCHES
To grow, library board looks at closings

You can see all of the headlines Michael submitted at ACES’s Web site, along with the judges’ comments. (Scroll down to Division III. You may notice that I’m listed as a judge, but I recused myself from deliberations involving Michael.) You can also look back at the headlines in Michael’s winning entry in 2003. (He’s an honorable mention in one category, but scroll down to see the category he won outright.)

Also last week: our deputy copy desk chief, Lisa McLendon, was installed as the national secretary of ACES. All in all, a great week for Eagle copy editors.

— Nick Jungman

A tragic national story

It was a tough and fascinating news week on many levels. The tragedy that jolted Virginia Tech, and all of us, on Monday morning brought home the challenges journalists face in this era when news is available around the clock from outlets all over the Internet. It was important to weigh how to reflect what had happened in our newspaper in a compelling way, without hammering our print readers with news they were sure to have seen already on TV and the Web. And we had to act fast to provide updates on this story at Kansas.com whenever new information surfaced.
One thing I always find interesting when a big national story hits is to compare how newspapers around the country handle coverage. The Newseum’s website is a great resource, where each day you can check out more than 500 front pages from newspapers around the world. On Tuesday morning, I noted that most U.S. newspapers presented bold, short headlines: "Rampage," "Bloodbath," "Massacre," "Campus carnage" were repeated in cities everywhere, accompanied by photos of mourners and police and victims on campus.
I know that headline writers across the country faced the same challenge we did at The Eagle– crafting a headline on an important story that we knew would be familiar to our readers well before anyone’s newspaper landed in the driveway.
The word "Why?" struck a chord with me as we were brainstorming possible headline options Monday in our newsroom, because that question just kept ringing in my brain the more I tried to understand this awful, incomprehensible event. On Tuesday when we studied our page with that bold headline at our morning newsmeeting, some of my colleagues sdiad they didn’t feel it was particularly effective. We heard from some readers who praised that choice. I noticed two other papers at the Newseum site used the same headline. I’m interested in what any of our other readers think.
The media was criticized for many aspects of how it handled coverage of this story. In our newsroom, we debated about which photos of Cho Seung-Hui to publish, and of course, NBC News was slammed by many for releasing those photos at all. However, I must say that when I saw those photos on the NBC News website, I immediately said to the editor next to me, "Oh my God, look at this."
And by publishing two of those photos in The Eagle I felt we were saying the same thing to readers.

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A first for Kansas.com

It’s not too unusual for The Eagle to field requests from national news organizations — Fox News was interested in the Jodi Sanderholm case earlier this year, and who didn’t call us for help covering BTK? — but we got a new sort of request on Monday.

Court TV called wanting to use our video. Video — from a newspaper! For us, a first.

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In case you missed it, Ron Sylvester — a reporter assigned to the interactive team here — wrote a terrific story for Sunday’s paper about a 74-year-old veteran from Wichita who spent 71 days in jail awaiting trial … on a charge of stealing two hot dogs. That’s an offense typically punishable by probation. Along with the story, Ron shot and edited several minutes of video from the veteran’s trial last week.

Apparently, Court TV saw it. They called Monday morning to request a snippet for "Catherine Crier Live." And yesterday afternoon, sure enough, they used it, with credit to Kansas.com and The Wichita Eagle.

Video’s brand-new territory for us, but territory we’re committed to exploring. Do us a favor and check it out. Let us know how we’re doing.

— Nick Jungman

Picturing the resurrection

Our front-page story on Easter Sunday about scientific and popular cultural critiques of the resurrection succeeded on many levels.

GrunewaldresurrectionFirst, there was Joe Rodriguez’s analytical story, which talked to believers, scholars and clergy; then there was Coryanne Graham’s design of the front page that immediately drew readers into the package.

But one of the most successful elements was the illustration by Brent Castillo, which encapsulated the story in a beautiful, elegant, eye-catching way.

How did he do it?

Brent tells us:

"For Easter, The Eagle was planning to write a story about how people viewed the resurrection story of Jesus. I was asked to create an illustration that captured the essence of the story. I talked with my art director, Arlice Davenport, about ideas. We decided that an iconic image of Jesus resurrected would be the focus of the illustration. But, in keeping with the story content, we would use a visual metaphor of having part of the image being chipped away by a hammer, which would represent the critics.

Blochresurrection "To carry this metaphor through, I needed to give the impression that the image was on a stone tablet. I found an image of an ancient stone tablet, and with an imaging program, I layered on top of it a painting of the resurrection. The first choice for the painting was Matthias Grünewald’s
‘The Resurrection.’ at top left. But his stylized painting with a sunburst behind the head of Jesus proved too hard to read in the space we were alotted. So I searched for a simpler, less-stylized painting and chose Carl Bloch’s ‘The Resurrection,’ at bottom left.

"After layering Bloch’s painting on the tablet, I removed parts of the image’s lower corner to make it look broken. Then I added cracks to enhance the illustration’s realism. Next, I found an old rock hammer, lay it on top of the tablet image and added shadows.

"An illustration should quickly relay the gist of the story. My hope was that the juxtaposition of a hammer and Jesus would intrigue readers enough that they would read the article."

It did.

There are many ways to tell a story. Using vivid imagery, like Brent’s illustration, to express conflict and drama is one of the most effective.

Good work, Brent.

Arlice

A loss for many

The newspaper business has always been rich with icons who seemed to, at one time or another, touch the lives and careers of half the country’s journalists. One of them was Neal Shine, father of The Eagle’s business editor, Tom Shine.

Neal Shine died this morning in Michigan. He was a reporter, editor and publisher of the Detroit Free Press, which was a sister paper of The Eagle until 2005. Scores of current and former journalists say Mr. Shine had profound impact on their careers. Among them is Eagle Publisher Lou Heldman, who started his career when Mr. Shine hired him as a reporter in 1972.

In Mr. Shine’s obituary, Joe Swickard quotes U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals
Judge Damon Keith: "Neal’s basic quality was fairness. He was just basically a fair man and he listened to
other people and took their advice and counsel. If there ever was a
person who lived by the statement, ‘Listen to learn and learn to
listen,’ it was Neal Shine."

You can read tributes from friends here.

Tom, our thoughts are with you and your family today.

Sherry

Contemplating The Eagle’s future

Canceled and delayed flights over the weekend gave me plenty of time to reflect on the four days I had just spent at the American Society of Newspaper Editors annual meeting in Washington, DC.

Each year several hundred editors gather to talk about current industry issues and share ideas. This year, the conference was tightly focused on the two biggest issues facing every newsroom in the country: protecting First Amendment freedoms, and accelerating the transition to online news reporting.

Unlike some past conferences, the tone and mood this year were more optimistic. Resolved, I’d say. One of my McClatchy Co. colleagues, David Zeeck (editor of The News Tribune in Tacoma), opened the conference with an inspiring speech, full of optimism and reminders of what a newspaper owes its community. You can read other conference coverage from the ASNE Reporter, a tabloid produced daily by a staff of student journalists.

I came back from Washington resolved to ratchet up the energy we expend at The Eagle on public service reporting. Or whatever name you want to give it: investigative reporting, watchdog journalism, accountability reporting. The First Amendment exists because the Constitution’s authors recognized the need for an independent press to provide oversight of government and other institutions. The Eagle needs to more consistently serve that role.

The other urgent need on the horizon is for us to use our new Web platform to expand reader interaction with the newspaper. I don’t like the phrase of the moment — "citizen journalism." But I agree with conference panelist Jennifer Carroll (VP/new media content for the Gannett Co.) that readers are experts in their own right and we need to more aggressively seek their contribution to our news reporting.

The conversation in Washington offered much to provoke thought and discussion in newsrooms and with readers. These are the ideas occupying my thoughts today, and I wanted to share them with you.

Sherry

Winning coverage

There’s nothing like having a little depth on your reporting staff.

When Raytheon Aircraft was sold in December, our aviation reporter, Molly McMillin, was on vacation in Florida. So Jerry Siebenmark and Bill Wilson stepped in to cover the story. It worked out pretty well.

Jerry and Bill were honored today by the Society of American Business Editors and Writers (SABEW) as winners in the breaking news category in our circulation group. SABEW’s Best in Business competition recognizes the best sections or publications as well as the best reporting in breaking news, enterprise and projects. There were more than 750 entries from daily and weekly newspapers, magazines wire services and Web sites. So the competition was pretty stiff.

While Jerry and Bill had the key bylines that day, lots of other folks helped with our coverage, too. Molly made phone calls from Florida and other biz staffers spent the afternoon interviewing Raytheon Aircraft workers and various civic and business leaders about the sale. The photo staff also contributed art from that day and from a plant tour we had taken a month before the sale. And graphic artists Paul Soutar and Mike Sullivan produced a great timeline illustrating the history of the company from its founding in 1932 by Walter and Olive Ann Beech.

It was good work by everyone.

Tom Shine

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Faith & comic strips

0331kudzuWe have received several e-mails and phone calls from readers wondering when we will resume publishing the comic strip "Umbert the Unborn" in the Saturday Faith & Values section.

We regularly publish only one comic strip in Faith & Values: "Kudzu" by Doug Marlette. The strip features the preacher Will B. Dunn as its main character. At left above is a panel from last Saturday.

"Umbert the Unborn" is actually a paid advertisement that is designed as a comic strip. The ad most recently appeared in the March 17 edition of Faith & Values.

It has also been published in other sections of The Eagle.

Whether "Umbert the Unborn" will be in the paper again is a decision the advertiser will make, not the newsroom.

"Kudzu" provides a humorous look at religious life that many of our readers find enjoyable and refreshing.

As always, if you have questions or suggestions for improving our coverage of faith-related stories, please feel free to let us know.

Arlice